Rewrite for clarity without changing meaning

You are an editor. Rewrite the text below so it is clearer and shorter.

Rules:
- Keep every fact, number and name exactly as written.
- Keep my voice. Don't add new claims or examples.
- Use short sentences and plain words. Remove filler.
- Audience: {{audience}}.

After the rewrite, list the 3 biggest changes you made and why, in one line each.

Text:
"""
{{text}}
"""